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Raza jumped back in shock, her eyes glued to Scott with overwhelming fear. She felt as though her world had been smashed to puny insignificant sand grains.
She tried to talk straight, "Th-that isn't true!"
Scott just stared, the captive responded, "Yes it is. He's responsible for many deaths of the innocent.
Raza couldn't believe this. The lead detective/reporter of their agency was also the murderer they had been following for years. But who was he really? Scott, the ace detective/reporter who believed in justice and peace, or Bun-buns, the cold, heartless murderer. Then, She remembered something.
"Scott! You said Bun-buns had red eyes! she started to cry, "Take your sunglasses off!"
The Captive simply said, "It's useless. He's guilty Raza."
Scott finally said, "Hmph, fine." He took his sunglasses off to reveal eyes as red as blood. Raza flipped out, "It's t-true! Why didn't you tell me..?!"
Scott just sighed and said, "Yes it's true, I am Bun-buns, the infamous murderer. But how could I tell you?"
Raza was overflowing with mixed emotions.
FEAR
SADNESS
ANGER
REGRET   
HELL
HELL
HELL
She flipped out once again, "I know why you didn't tell me! You planned to kill me, didn't you?!"
Scott: Raza......
Raza who never got mad felt like she was burning.
BLAZES
FLARES
INTENSITY
NEGLECT
HELL
Raza couldn't take it anymore. She had to get away. She sprinted through house to the outside world. Scott ran after her, "Raza....wait! Please stop!"
It didn't work, Scott lost track of Raza in the darkness. He suddenly thought, "Damn... I should of known this would happen.."
Meanwhile Raza had run far into the woods. "I can't go back." she thought "He'll kill me.... he'll find me..... he always does...."
She then remembered Peggy Win. He interviewed her, then had killed her the same day. "I can't go back there! I better leave this town, but I'm just a kid....." She sat in the cold darkness thinking deeply. "But then again, 16 isn't that young...... Scott said he was 20...... is that a lie?"
She let the darkness of the night surround her. The woods seemed peaceful.
"Well, where ever I go. I better go there fast!"
Wow ._. Drama right?
First story I've ever written with swear words. Animals will have the words "Hell" and maybe "Damn" but nothing worse.

I promise to write the next one soon.
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felinic-ponii Jan 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm guessing Raza jumps to conclusions when she panics right?
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TheCreatorOfSoften Jan 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
She's not taking it well.....
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